This cannot be a full review because I read this about a year ago. What I can remember and say about this is: it's a unique kind of book. I thought the story while not tremendously different from a lot of other UF it was uniquely presented in certain ways.
I wouldn't recommend this book to my friends. I would suggest it for anyone who is extremely tolerant of grammar or editing mistakes. This will please some people but not most who are experienced or critical readers. Needs more polishing to put it lightly.